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Saturday, October 8, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday: Good Memories


After a rough night MacKenzie wakes up to his new housemate dragging him out for a run. He has other ideas on ways she could cure his depression...

Her predatory smile only widened. "Exercise is good for depression."

"I'm not depressed, I have flashbacks. The two are not the same."

"You'll have fewer bad memories if you make some new good memories."

Then get naked.
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5 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 9, 2011 at 1:49 AM

    I love that last line.

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  2. Chrystalla ThomaOctober 9, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    Hee, excellent, I love his thought. Great dialogue, great tension. Love it!

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  3. Anya RichardsOctober 9, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    LOL! So like a man..."I'm not depressed" "Get naked." Love it

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  4. Taryn KincaidOctober 9, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Nice, crisp sentences. Love that last line!

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  5. 1000th.monkeyOctober 10, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    I agree with her, and his (mental) response is hilarious since he's agreeing with her suggestion ;)

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