tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5329782430566577328.post8048669894286263240..comments2023-12-19T05:15:27.114-05:00Comments on Liana Brooks: Essential Story vs. FillerLiana Brookshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14587774916354749190noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5329782430566577328.post-60567692754024023472010-06-12T23:36:26.930-04:002010-06-12T23:36:26.930-04:00Hey, this is some really good advice. I'm goi...Hey, this is some really good advice. I'm going to have to go over this as I'm editing my chapters in Critique Circle to make sure it's all hunky dory. I normally don't like scene-formulas but this is actually a good one.Shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00456068019298922261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5329782430566577328.post-32174649149099461542010-06-11T17:01:09.087-04:002010-06-11T17:01:09.087-04:00Terrific advice. I was having this problem the ot...Terrific advice. I was having this problem the other day. I was BORED writing the scene and realized that if I was bored writing it, God help the reader. And it was for this very reason--it was a getting here to there kind of thing that could've been summarized in a sentence or two. Ugh.Roni Lorenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02719679344024635326noreply@blogger.com